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Hello. This is fantastic. I'm loving your story and looking forward to reading more. I honestly think it's a great idea to use Substack for fiction. Btw, I prefer just reading one chapter per email. I think that's a good format. I'd read these every day if you posted them every day, but I can wait too, if I must. :) I'm from New Mexico, USA btw. Happy Sunday!

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I'm so glad to hear this Sarah 💕 This feedback is everything to me 😍✨️ More in the future 🫡 And hello from Sri Lanka 💝

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Jun 6Liked by Spooky with Izel

This is awesome, keep going. you're onto something great here.

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Thank you so much Ian! This means a lot <3

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I love that her subconscious is a Spanish guy named Pablo 😆👏❤️

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Glad you liked it 🥹

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Jun 1Liked by Spooky with Izel

I’m into it, man!! It was cool, I cannot wait for the next chapter!! I love your style! I’m a slow reader and I’m enjoying the atmosphere around the mansion! Keep writing!!

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Thank you so much reading Blue! Chapter 2 coming out today! The feedback means a lot <3

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Jun 1Liked by Spooky with Izel

Loved this! Looking forward to more! I think I noticed one typo. You meant to say, “like the weather”, but you wrote “like the whether”. I may have misunderstood though! Keep it coming! 😻

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Oh no, I think it is a typo! Thank you so much for pointing it out Alexis! I'll fix it! Glad you liked it <3

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Ahh I loved this! Looking forward to more spooky stories 👻

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Thank you so much for reading 💕

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RemovedJun 25Liked by Spooky with Izel
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Thank you so much man 💕 I'm so glad you liked it 😍

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